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Post by RogueRowan on Jun 30, 2015 18:49:21 GMT -5
Howl's poses Howl 1 - Howl 2 - Howl 3 Howl's dane pose Moon's poses Moon 1 - Moon 2 - Moon 3 Moon's dane pose I have a whole pack of wolves, so I'll add them later on. For now, this is the pair I'm showing. Give me your most detailed critiques so I know what to work towards.
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Post by Barguestspirit on Jul 1, 2015 5:48:28 GMT -5
Howl: All 4 of Howl's poses are off as far as leg alignment. He/she needs to be turned a bit more to the right, away from the camera so that the front legs line up better, as too much of the opposite foreleg is visible. As far as the head goes, the first dali pose is the best, as the head is nice and square, but again, it's best to start with getting the legs aligned before moving on to the judge the head. The head on the profile pose looks okay, but perhaps the ears could be more lined up, as it looks like too much of the opposite one is visible. Moon: Leg alignment is much better on this wolf, with the 1st and 4th poses being the best aligned out of this bunch. On the profile pose, again, I think the ears could be a bit better lined up. I don't think I've ever seen the VPZ wolf file shown, so good luck.
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Post by RogueRowan on Jul 1, 2015 12:02:32 GMT -5
what about evenness of the noseshine? I've been trying to get them even but sometimes the highest breathing point makes them wonky.
Thanks for your feedback.
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Post by shebaatje on Jul 2, 2015 6:31:21 GMT -5
For Moon: like Barguestspirit pointed out, her leg alignment is best in the 1st and 4th pose. The third pose has the best head alignment as well as the best noseshines evenness. So if you could get a pose with leg alignment like the first and last pose, but with a head like the third, I think you have a BIS worthy pose^^.
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Post by mandymom on Jul 17, 2015 19:51:40 GMT -5
Moon's poses look aligned, and she appears confident.
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