Madison
Petz Groomer
Owned by a GSD <3
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Post by Madison on Jun 19, 2012 2:21:42 GMT -5
I hexed a bunny! It's a cat-based hex, hexed from the Persian, and it's the first real hex I've ever done (or at least, the first one I haven't given up on), so it's been a learning process. I've been working on this for like, a week (because I'm too ADD to just sit there and work on it - I could have done this in a day or two if I could actually sit there and work on it), and I'm out of ideas, so I thought I'd post it here and see if anyone has any comments or suggestions on what I can do to make it better. Please tear it apart, I want this to be as good as I can make it, and I want it to be something people will want to adopt. Ignore the colours and textures, I'll make it pretty with paintballz and make the texture changes more gradual once I'm finished with the actual shape, I just threw these colours together so that people can get a better idea of the shape of the file. Also, I can't quite decide what to do with the nose. I'm debating between leaving the default cat nose up, or deleting it and creating an addball linez nose like rabbits have, what do you think? I'd like to put a litter up once I'm done and offer customs, would people be interested? EDIT: oops, forgot to say that the tail is based off of one of the original tail ballz, so it moves
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Post by thedrowsydeer on Jun 19, 2012 5:47:46 GMT -5
OMG that's amazing, Madison O.O It's body is very realistic, nice work there! I love the little tail <3
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Post by ♥Daveena♥ on Jun 19, 2012 9:18:23 GMT -5
Aww it's adorable! Maybe just make feet in the back longer but that's just my opinion. I think litter would be adorable maybe have some custom slots? I personally think it would be massively more adorable with some addball whiskers again just my own opinion lol
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Post by midnightwolf on Jun 19, 2012 9:26:23 GMT -5
Wow, I think this looks very well done. o.o
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Post by affinity on Jun 19, 2012 9:30:34 GMT -5
Oh this is SO cute! Very well done! I think addball whiskers would be just too precious!
Maybe do a litter and have different coat patterns? I think white with black spots would be too cute to pass up!
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Post by Katherine on Jun 19, 2012 11:34:37 GMT -5
This is super cute! I love bunnies <3 I think whiskers would look cute too, but it's already soo adorable (:
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Post by Jess @ PRU on Jun 19, 2012 11:46:41 GMT -5
awww, super cute! ^^ the bodymods are wonderful, and for starting with persian, you could hardly tell! :3
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Post by ♥Daveena♥ on Jun 19, 2012 13:37:01 GMT -5
Also a lop eared one would be precious! And I would want it lol
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Post by Aurawolf on Jun 19, 2012 13:55:14 GMT -5
That's amazing. I'm seriously in love with the file! The textures you used are great. <3
Edit: By the way, I recognize you from the PKC :3
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Post by ► SnjHusky ◀ on Jun 19, 2012 15:03:20 GMT -5
Wow, Madison! It's really good! I especially like the tail, it looks pretty realistic! I agree about the lopped ear, it would be so cute! I'd definetly be interested!
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Madison
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Post by Madison on Jun 20, 2012 4:32:06 GMT -5
Aww, thanks everyone! Thanks for all the suggestions, here's the next version: I made the back legs a little longer, tweaked the inner ears, and added some addball whiskers. What do you think? I'm debating about deleting the nose and adding linez for a nose like real rabbits have, which would make it more realistic but would possibly take away some of the cute factor. Any thoughts on that? Any other suggestions? I'm not a fan of how the inner ear looks in a lot of the poses, is there any way I can tweak that so that it'll show up better or is that just something I have to live with? I'll definitely have a lop-eared version of this, don't worry! I hexed this file because I desperately want a little brown and white lop-eared, but because I live on campus during the school year and the dorms only allow fish, I can't get one. I was originally going to just do a lop-eared rabbit, but then I decided that I wanted to hex a couple of the rabbits I had growing up, who had normal ears. Once I get the body shape perfect and just how I want it, I'll hex a lop-eared version. I'll definitely put up a litter of these guys when I'm done. I'm thinking I'll hex a few normal eared rabbits and a few lop eared rabbits and put them up for adoption, and then they'll be available for customs for trade for a while. How does that sound? And hey Aurawolf, I recognize you too! I decided to take a break from hex painting PKC breeds and venture into the rest of the PC. I plan on starting to hex PKC breedfiles too Any more thoughts/comments/suggestions? Seriously, feel free to tear this apart and suggest away
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Post by ♥Daveena♥ on Jun 20, 2012 6:33:13 GMT -5
I'm curious about the nose...maybe save this file and make a copy do the nose and then see which one you like better? I do that for a lot of my hexes. I seriously have a giant folder of a different variations and whatnot lol. As for the ears, just tweak moving the balls around until they sit just right, sometimes it's almost impossible to get them completely perfect, but tweaking the placement and pulling one out of the AC will help you figure out where those balls need to be
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Madison
Petz Groomer
Owned by a GSD <3
Posts: 237
Petz Versions: 4
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Post by Madison on Jun 20, 2012 23:18:00 GMT -5
Here's how it looks with a "rabbit nose" made up of addballz: The ballz/linez are really small, but any bigger and it was too big. I'm leaning more towards the original nose, what do you think? I also tweaked the inner ear a little bit, to try to make it show up better.
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Post by affinity on Jun 20, 2012 23:26:53 GMT -5
I think I agree with you that I"m more a fan of the original nose... just seems "cuter"
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Madison
Petz Groomer
Owned by a GSD <3
Posts: 237
Petz Versions: 4
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Post by Madison on Jun 21, 2012 1:22:13 GMT -5
Yeah, I'm leaning more towards the normal cat nose, but I did tweak this nose a bit and it looks a little better. Lops!
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