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Post by Zekumi on Jan 3, 2009 20:31:19 GMT -5
Please remember that no competition should exceed a month in running time. If this has not been judged within another week, a new judge will be found.
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babyzlove14
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Post by babyzlove14 on Jan 3, 2009 22:57:41 GMT -5
The Creepiest Halloween Ever
It was a stormy Halloween night. I was going trick-or-treating with my mother. She still thinks that I can’t go trick-or-treating with my friends because I’m too young! I explained to her that I’m not a baby and that I could go with four or five on my friends. I saw a nice, girlie house that I wanted to trick-or-treat at. After we had lunch that was the first house we went to. That’s when it all went wrong!
I knocked on the pink door. All of a sudden, an old woman grabbed me and took me inside. She slammed the door on my mother! I thought that was totally rude, but I had a bigger problem. That mean, old lady said, “Wait here, I have a surprise for you.” I knew it wasn’t a good one. The room was so creepy! There was a TV that wouldn’t turn on and I heard a spooky noise. Could it be a ghost? The lights flickered like there was a little kid switching it on and off. Oh my god, I was so scared that this might be my last Halloween. The women finally came back with the surprise.
The surprise was a huge pot. It could fit me in it! Oh no, the evil lady was going to cook me for dinner! As she put on her apron, I made a run for the door. All the doors were locked! She caught me and said that I was cute enough to eat. I yelled, “Look…a dog!” I zoomed up the stairs. It was even creepier because I saw a creepy face on the window and when I walked towards it, it disappeared. The lady ran upstairs, grabbed my hair and told me that it was time for dinner.
She held me over the pot and was about to drop me in. Then, she cried, “What am I doing?” There was hope that I wouldn’t become soup. She set me down on the floor. I thought that she would let me leave, but instead she was looking for some pepper to put in her soup. It was official; I was going to become food!
Suddenly, there was a miracle! I found my AT&T cell phone in my pocket. I ran upstairs before the women could find out I was gone. I called my mom and dad. My dad answered the phone. I was speaking fast, but he could understand me. I told him that I was about to get eaten and the house was pink, girly and had lots of pumpkins. Luckily, the house was close to our house. The woman found me. She was about to grab me, but the doorbell rang. I was saved by my dad! I gave him a big hug and went home alive. That's my story!
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Post by candy~ on Jan 5, 2009 10:33:17 GMT -5
Wow! Thanks candyflosscuties@yahoo.co.uk
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babyzlove14
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Post by babyzlove14 on Jan 5, 2009 20:18:25 GMT -5
Whooo! Great job Candy!
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